Some people use the terms "editing" and "proofreading" interchangeably. Others mean something very different with each term:Editing: The process of looking at the whole paper to note its overall content, organization, and other major issues that make the paper an effective document. (Section A of this handout offers strategies for editing.)
Proofreading: The process of looking more closely at sentences and word choices to be sure they are effective and grammatically correct.
A. Editing: For working on larger issues
Once a rough draft is finished, you should try to set
it aside for at least a day and come back to the paper with a fresh mind
and thus more easily catch the errors in it. You will bring a fresh mind
to the process of polishing a paper and ready to try some of the following
strategies.
1. Read the Paper Aloud If we read the paper aloud slowly,
we have two senses--the eyes AND the ears--working for us. Thus, what one
sense misses, the other may pick up.
2. Check the Thesis Statement and Organization
Write down your thesis on a piece of paper if it is not directly stated
in your paper. Does it accurately state your main idea? Is it in fact supported
by the paper? Does it need to be changed in any way? On that piece of paper,
list the main idea of each paragraph under the thesis statement. Is each
paragraph relevant to the thesis? Are the paragraphs in a logical sequence
or order?
3. Remember that you are Writing for Others No matter
how familiar they may be with the material, they cannot "get inside" your
head and understand your approach to it unless you express yourself clearly.
Therefore, it is useful to read the paper through once as you bear in mind
whether or not the student or teacher or friend who will be reading it
will understand what you are saying. That is, have you said exactly what
you wanted to?
4. Check the Paper's Development Are there sufficient
details? Is the logic valid?
5. Check the Paper's Coherence and Unity Are the major
points connected? Are the relationships between them expressed clearly?
Do they all relate to the thesis?
6. Check your Writing for Abstract Subjects, Particularly
Those you have Combined with Passive Verbs
Try substituting concrete or personal subjects with active
verbs.Original: More attractiveness is sometimes given an act when
it is made illegal.
Revision: When an act becomes illegal, some
people find it more attractive.
7. Cut out Wordiness Wherever Possible Original:
They are desirous of ... Revision: They want ...
8. Use Active Verbs Since verbs tend to carry the meaning
of your sentences, use the most precise and active ones possible. Thus,
avoid constructions using the various forms of the verb "to be."
Original: Inflation is a threat to our economy.
Revision: Inflation threatens our economy.
9. Unless Using the Construction for Emphasis, Avoid
Using Stretcher Phrases such as "It Is" and "There Are"
Remember the need for strong verbs. Original:
There were several reasons for the United States' entrance into the war.
Revision: The United States entered the war
for several reasons.
10. Replace Colloquialisms with Fresh and more Precise
Statements Because colloquialisms tend to be used so often, they also are
not very precise in meaning. A hassle, for example, can be an annoyance,
an argument, or a physical fight. Original: Her behavior flipped me out.
Revision:
Her behavior first stunned, then delighted me.
11. Review your Sentences Be sure that no parts of the
paper are "short and choppy"; be sure that the rhythm of your paper is
not interrupted, except for a good reason, like emphasis. A good way of
smoothing out such a problem is to try combining sentences, and in so doing
showing the relationship between them.
Original: The best show in terms of creating
a tense atmosphere is "Jeopardy." This is probably the most famous of all
games shows. It is my favorite show. Revision: The best show in terms of
creating a tense atmosphere is "Jeopardy," which is also probably the most
famous of all game shows and my favorite.
12. Review your Diction Remember that others are reading
your paper and that even the choice of one word can affect their response
to it. Try to anticipate their response, and choose your words accordingly.
Original:
The media's exploitation of the Watergate scandal showed how biased it
was already. Revision: The media's coverage of the Watergate scandal suggests
that perhaps those in the media had already determined Nixons guilt.
In addition to being more specific, the revision does
not force the reader to defend the media. In the first example, though,
the statement is so exaggerated that even the reader who is neutral on
the issue may feel it necessary to defend the media. Thus, the writer of
the original has made his job of persuading the reader that much harder.
Proofreading: For working on sentence and word-level
issues No matter how many times you read through a "finished" paper, you're
likely to miss many of your most frequent errors. The following guide will
help you proofread more effectively
1. General Strategies Begin by taking a break.
Allow yourself some time between writing and proofing. Even a five-minute
break is productive because it will help get some distance from what you
have written. The goal is to return with a fresh eye and mind.
Try to s-l-o-w d-o-w-n as you read through a paper. That
will help you catch mistakes that you might otherwise overlook. As you
use these strategies, remember to work slowly. If you read at a normal
speed, you won't give your eyes sufficient time to spot errors:
Reading aloud. Reading a paper aloud encourages you to read every
little word.
Reading with a "cover." Sliding a blank sheet of paper
down the page as you read encourages you to make a detailed, line-by-line
review of the paper.
2. Strategies That Personalize Proofreading You
won't be able to check for everything (and you don't have to), so you should
find out what your typical problem areas are and look for each type of
error individually. Here's how:
1. Find out what errors you typically make. Review instructors'
comments about your writing and/or review your paper(s) with a Writing
Lab tutor.
2. Learn how to fix those errors. Talk with your instructor
and/or with a Writing Lab tutor. The instructor and the tutor can help
you understand why you make the errors you do so that you can learn to
avoid them.
3. Use specific strategies. Use these strategies to find
and correct your particular errors in usage and sentence structure, and
spelling and punctuation.
For Usage and Sentence Structure
-For subject/verb agreement:
1. Find the main verb in each sentence.
2. Match the verb to its subject.
3. Make sure that the subject and verb agree in number.
-For pronoun reference/agreement:
1. Skim your paper, stopping at each pronoun. Look especially
at it, this, they, their, and them.
2. Search for the noun that the pronoun replaces. If
you can't find any noun, insert one beforehand or change the pronoun to
a noun. If you can find a noun, be sure it agrees in number and person
with your pronoun.
See the OWL handout concerning Pronouns.
-For parallel structure:
1. Skim your paper, stopping at key words that signal
parallel structures. Look especially for and, or, not only...but also,
either... or, neither...nor, both...and.
2. Make sure that the items connected by these words
(adjectives, nouns, phrases, etc.) are in the same grammatical form.
Spelling and Punctuation - For spelling:
1. Examine each word in the paper individually. Move
from the end of each line back to the beginning. Pointing with a pencil
helps you really see each word.
2. If necessary, check a dictionary to see that each
word is spelled correctly.
-For compound sentence commas:
1. Skim for the conjunctions and, but, for, or, nor,
so and yet.
2. See whether there is a complete sentence on each side
of the conjunction. If so, place a comma before the conjunction.
-For introductory commas:
1. Skim your paper, looking only at the first two or
three words of each sentence.
2. Stop if one of these words is a dependent marker,
a transition word, a participle, or a preposition.
3. Listen for a possible break point before the main
clause.
4. Place a comma at the end of the introductory phrase
or clause (which is before the independent clause).
-For comma splices:
1. Skim the paper, stopping at every comma.
2. See whether there is a complete sentence on each side
of the comma. If so, add a coordinating conjunction after the comma or
replace the comma with a semicolon.
-For fragments:
1. Look at each sentence to see whether it contains an
independent clause.
2. Pay special attention to sentences that begin with
dependent marker words (such as because) or phrases such as for example
or such as.
3. See if the sentence might be just a piece of the previous
sentence that mistakenly got separated by a period.
1. Review each sentence to see whether it contains more
than one independent clause. Start with the last sentence of your paper,
and work your way back to the beginning, sentence by sentence.
2. Break the sentence into two sentences if necessary.
-For apostrophes:
1. Skim your paper, stopping only at those words which
end in "s."
2. See whether or not each "s" word needs an apostrophe.
If an apostrophe is needed, you will be able to invert the word order and
say "of" or "of the": Mary's hat the hat of Mary
-For left-out words:
1. Read the paper aloud, pointing to every word as you
read. Don't let your eye move ahead until you spot each word.
2. Also, make sure that you haven't doubled any words.